22 March 2017

Record of meeting 22 March 2017

The writers

Terry, Cath, Helene, Lynn, Trevor, Elizabeth

The words of the day

Laud – to praise highly

Succour – to assist and support

Cicerone – guide to sight seers

Infer – deduce, suppose, conclude

Pragmatic – practical, realistic, sensible

Comportment – personal demeanour or conduct

Writing from words of the day

Helene – At morning tea, Cath – His own opinion, Terry – Altitude sickness, Lynn – What she really wanted, Elizabeth – For himself and Terry – a rare breed (very entertaining).


Reading of homework

The writers enjoyed the start of the follow on homework and read out the following stories; Helene – Crystal, Trevor – Anton, Lynn – Her escape, Elizabeth – I did not want to go and Terry – Pieces.

Exercise – show don’t tell


We took the sentence “She quickly walked to the red door and nervously took the key from her purse” and rewrote and expanded it to show rather than tell by removing the “ly” words and not using adverbs.

The exercise stimulated discussion on writing and the use of show don’t tell method of writing.

Homework

1.    Write the next part of your story or the first and second parts if you haven’t started yet

2.   Bring in two common nouns, proper nouns, adverbs, verbs and adjectives.












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